If you have a preferred version, please state which in the comments below, and I'll take it into consideration.
V1
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View of TV screen is technically incorrect, but I felt it was the strongest choice storytellingwise. |
V2
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TV is removed entirely. If I actually went with this, I'd probably change the circle around the kids a bit to better reflect the actual placement of the TV. |
V3
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Viewing angle has been corrected for TV, can see wall behind TV, VCR is at a bit of a wonky angle. |
V4
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Wall behind TV has been blacked out, less distracting. VCR still has wonky angle. |
V5
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TV Screen has been removed. |
V6
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Angle on VCR is corrected, still no screen on TV. |
V7
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Screen on TV, angle on VCR fixed. |
I like the first and the last the best. The first because of the items on the screen but you're right about the inaccuracies of the tv. I liked the last one because it looked liked you fixed it a bit.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite is V7. Although I think if we were viewing the children more in front of them than above, the picture frames would be viewed from behind and we'd see the back. I think you were trying to view them more from above which indicates the way you drew the picture frames. Was just a little confused about that. :D
V3 > V1 >> V2 >>>> V4 > V7 >>> V6 > V5
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