This page took three attempts to complete. Every time it was nearly finished, I would save it, and my laptop would corrupt the file, and I had to start all over again. I figured the first time was improper saving on my part, the second time showed me that I needed to move my work over to my desktop instead. So while I would usually appreciate critique, the page you're looking at is the result of two all nighters and a very cramped hand. It's definately shakey in parts, but I'm glad the inks are finally finished.