Here's a very ugly/rough copy of RSG Ch2 Page 1. All those blurry dots aren't blurry in the real version. I'd love to get some criticism on this, but unless a problem is GLARINGLY bad, it won't get corrected (at least, any time soon). All criticism will go to future pages, though.
Vigilante comic artist, illustrator, and comic craft blogger at www.nattosoup.blogspot.com. I have an MFA from SCAD in Sequential Art, which means I'm highly educated in the art of drawing funny picture books. I specialize in comics aimed at young girls, and enjoy the finer things in life- seinen manga, whiney autobio graphic novels, and science fiction.