Ready Set Go Inks Page 2

It took ALL DAY but page two is inked.  Critiques please.


  1. Bookshelf looks great. Interesting shot.

    Foreground rug does well to balance B&W. Consider putting more detail closer towards the camera in the rugs.

    Remi's legs seem long (primarily her butt looks high and a bit scrunched but not too much).

    Also, no wall fixtures? I just assumed Julia would have some. It doesn't look bad, or seem wrong, that's just based on what you've told me about Julia. I imagine her trying to put up art to seem fancy/high class.


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